Well - u have done the single parts of the image quite well. Especially the hair. But the parts are not 'conected' to each other. I suppose u painted them each on a different layer.
The edge of the face is very hard. The edge of the hair is very hard and so on. Hair casts shadow on the face for example....try to smooth those hard edges and 'melt' everything together and the image will improve

Keep it up

beautifull face

i esp like the hair and wings ^^

Well done, especially with a mouse

This piece is begging for semi-realism,if you put a realistic face on her and a little more detail in the body you have a real winner here.